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Event 2 (Wake): fav.me/d5u8765 (Prologue) , fav.me/d5uvaik (Main)
Event 3 (Brink): fav.me/d632dr1 (Prologue) , fav.me/d69pl5r (SCRIPT PLACEHOLDER/Flash Comic still WIP)
Event 4: You are here.
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Took me so long to make this, ugh.

Anyways, I forgot to tell that ~Airanke and I have a little... synchronizing in our stories. XD Since Harun and Maeve live together, each other's character is ALWAYS cameo'd. XD

Maeve's Event 4: fav.me/d6b1pi5

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VolbeatFiro Jul 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
all the effects turned out just right on this, and lovely details and use of the coding. cool how you showed your artist notes in this as well, I really enjoy reading that behind the plot scenes kind of processing to stuff
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lixelated Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, you really used the format's potential! I loved the running toward the light bit and how the transitions make the panels and speech easy to follow even if they're spaced in a way you might not follow in a static comic. Pretty intense story too!
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Carminadelic Jul 7, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Oh shucks, thank you :iconblushplz:
Glad you think the story ain't sucky!
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Leptocyon Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OH.MY.GOD~!!!!! This looks so awesome!!!
You even played with animation!! (That wall "scrolling", Altan shaking his head, WALKING DOWN THAT TUNNEL!!!
The combination of panels and those animations is just so wonderful! Makes the reader want to continue reading because who knows what surprise in performance awaits him!
Really enjoyable read, as always. Everything is so appealing and as far as my amateur-eye can judge, this flash is really a masterpiece. :3
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Carminadelic Jul 5, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Thanks, buddy XD. It's really confusing to handle all these at first, but in the end it all worked out and I learned to organize a bit better! Since I feel like I'm in a standstill at learning new techniques in traditional comics (aka pages) so far, I shifted my attention in flash. 

I actually planned to ask you to BETA this along with Volbs, but since you don't have much activity for the past weeks both in DA and Tumblr, I decided not to bother you XD. At least I'm getting somewhere and I'm sure I can even make it even better as the events progress--hopefully. Masterpiece is a little too far for me, but I'm glad you think so XD. In terms of the story, characters and writing this time, what do you think? 83
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Leptocyon Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Effort is obvious since with every event your entries look better and better. C:

Oh, my activity... yeah, a bit restrained because I had to study for exams. I deactivated tumblr, so don't count on any activity there. x)
To be honest, due to all things which were happening I totally got out of the system so at the first read I was a bit confused since a lot time passed since last event (and I didn't read that placeholder for event 3, my bad. Fixed now.) and I forgot what these characters are actually doing. x) But okay, I was finally able to catch your Duality story and I must say that Harun really loves to make Maeve worry. I mean, in each event he gets "lost" and she dies of worry for him (I take all that as intentionally made like that). xD Silly boy. I was a bit confused with that part when he awakes at Maeve's house since she is talking about him overhearing a respective conversation but I haven't found anywhere that conversation to actually occur. That kinda confused me.
All is full of mystery and you jump from scene to scene pretty fast and I understand that it's because you have a lot to tell but little time and all that. So, I take that everything you do, or decide to skip is done on purpose and I give you full authority for what you show/tell us. :) I like it, okay? And wohoo, the lake trio appears (or am I seeing things). Now that has to mean something! :la:

Sorry if this looks rushed, I just have a thousand things to do, plus study and so little time, aahhh. D: I just read everything Duality-related from you and finally decided to look tasks you were given in each event so everything makes more sense now. x)
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Carminadelic Jul 7, 2013  Professional Filmographer
You don't really need to read Event 3 to catch up, really. XD I'm pretty sure I did not make any callback to Brink, but I did on the very first one Wake (Event 2 and debut). Harun doesn't like looking trouble, since he's... technically a non-action guy. It just so happens danger comes to him whether he likes it or not. And ah yes, I actually had that in the script 8D, the scene where Harun overheard Maeve the night before. I cut those panels off though. 

Time constraints made me shorten the script considerably, so I made sure to make the pace fast by skipping some unnecessary scenes, and just refer to the ones that needed to answer the questions like-- "Why on earth is Harun in the mountain?" sort of thing. Sssh, Lepto be quiet about that. I'm not exactly allowed to directly involve legendaries in my stories while still in Duality, so not-so-subtle hints will have to do XD. This event has foreshadowing but I'm sure the next event won't make much references... except those two executioners at the beginning...

Ah, okay then  Good luck with the never-ending exams, Lepto. How long does that last? O.o I've been hearing it since April and it's not over yet?
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ninemore Jul 5, 2013  Student Filmographer
ASDLFKJASLFDJ OH SNAP CARMS THIS IS AWESOME! :iconspazattackplz:
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Carminadelic Jul 5, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Thank you Dia. Hey if ever you plan to do the same for your BFOI I'm here to help you with a little bit of AS3... if you ever plan to do stuff in it XDXDXD
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ninemore Jul 6, 2013  Student Filmographer
aksjdfklsajf yes of course!! I could use a hand dealing with these things in the future! Thanks Carms!! ;v;
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